literature

you say

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you say, everything'l be alright
you say, everything will be fine
you say everything'l be okay
but please, stop lien to me

This weed that you planted, you call it a flower
you let it spread, and then you, let it get taller
until it wraps around you, chokin you harder
and then you realize, you finally realize the power
of lien to yourself, in lien to me
being positive, no it aint, always the key
havnt you hear, the truth, it will set you free
you should listen to that, and maybe you'd see
that your lies make nothin better
false hope and pride make nothin better
it'll only get worse and then youll hav'ta
lie your way outta that making your hole deeper
untill your buried, your burried with yopur lies beneath ya
so yeah it's a rap. i've been into writing raps like these and i showed this one to my friend and she said that it was amazing. so i finally decided to post it. its not done. not even halfway. the rest is in my binder, which is at school becuase my teacher is grading it. (hopefully she doesnt see this rap or any of the others iv'e written)

SORRY FOR THE BAD SPELLING AND GRAMMAR. i suck at it and i hope you can ignore it

the meaning:
(just in case you dont get it)

this is about how people always say "it'll be fine, everything will be okay." and stuff like that. most of the time they are lieing, trying to cheer you up and maybe even themselves.

im being a hypocritt now, i know, i know. but wouldnt everyone be? when was the last time you said that everything will be okay and you were lieing. just think about it. we cant cotrol. we think it will help but sometimes it makes it worse. you give them false pride and hope.

please comment. please,please,please comment. i appreciate comments WAY more than favs.
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